Thursday, 12 September 2013
Storyline Two
A girl called Chloe, moves to an eerie house with her father after her mother passes away. The house needs some work as the woman who previously lived their was old and didn't look after it. Chloe is adventurous and finds herself in the cellar, bedrooms and then finally in the attic, encircled by boxes that are filled with items that belonged to the deceased lady. The girl finds ornaments, clothes and many boxes full of photos. Chloe is shocked by some of the photos that she see's as it appeared the lady lived alone, with no family, but had pictures of many different families in unusual scenarios. Where did these photos come from and who were the families? Her father shouts her downstairs, awaiting her was more boxes that her father had unloaded from the van. He tells her to try and unpack as he needs her help with downstairs. She goes upstairs, and hears a noise coming from the attic. It is dark as the electrics are not working. She moves her torch, to see the ceiling. The banging noises starts to become more consistent. She yelps for her father. He meets her in her bedroom and she tells him what she heard. He says he'll check it out and goes off up the attic stairs. Her father never returns. She stands at her door, not daring to pass the line onto the landing. She stands out of her room slightly and shines her torch up towards the bathroom door. A figure runs past. She turns back into her room, shutting the door behind her. She hears a bang on the door and in her torch beam see's her father laying on the floor beside the door, blood around his head. She runs over to him, now crying frantically. She asks "What have they done to you?" He's still breathing. The door opens, and she see's the figure enter the room. Hiding behind the door, over her fathers body, she runs out the door and past what looks like a man. She reaches the front door but its locked, and the windows are still boarded up after being desolate for so long. She looks towards the cellar and notices a light coming from behind the door. She knows there was nothing down there, as she had explored the rotting walls earlier. She can't help herself and opens the door. Looking down the stairs, she see's nothing but a small camping lantern lighting up the whole room. When she's at the bottom, she notices a bed at the side and a few open cans of food. Someone had been living there. She is now confused, she saw none of this earlier. The man returns and comes down the stairs. The figure goes back upstairs, with rope and a hammer in his hand. Chloe can now breathe again. She followers him upstairs, and see's her dad tied up on an old chair. He shouts her, the man is nowhere to be seen. She looks down, as she feels something heavy in her hand. The hammer. It was her who injured her father. She starts shouting frantically about how he betrayed her mother and that she will never forgive him. She drops her torch and raises the hammer above his head, he shouts "No, Chloe, No! I'm Sorry". The screen turns black, just showing the torch beam looking at the door. The torch is then switched off.
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